Editing Erin (section)

==Appearance==
She is considered attractive by multiple parties, with Victoria believing she had the making of a model, and that it would be "not fair if [she weren't]".<ref name="II2.7 e1">Erin, Rain’s friendship he wasn’t intending to mess with, was not the kind of person I imagined driving a van like that, or spending time with someone of Rain’s somewhat grungy, not-inclined-to-smile presentation.  There were women where someone’s first thought might be ‘they could be a model’ and there were women where the first thought was ‘they have to be a model, it’s not fair if they aren’t’.  She was the latter.  Short black hair with a long swoop at the front, dangly jewelry, more piercings in one ear, and one of the memorial shirts, much like how the dress I was wearing served as a way for me to represent and remember Brockton Bay.  She was from New York, it seemed, or she wanted to represent it. - [https://www.parahumans.net/2017/12/30/flare-2-7/ Excerpt] from [[Flare 2.7]]</ref> Similarly people at the Fallen compound considered her attractive<ref name="I4aII e2">“You want a ride, rain man?” Jay asked.<br/><br/>“No thanks.  Walking with a friend.”<br/><br/>“I know who you’re talking about.  You know you don’t have the slightest chance with her, right?”<br/><br/>“Of being her friend?”<br/><br/>“Yeah, right,” Jay said.  He rolled his eyes.  “Enjoy that walk.” - [https://www.parahumans.net/2018/02/06/shade-interlude-4a/ Excerpt] from [[Interlude 4a II]]</ref> with her appearance drawing looks.<ref name="I4aII e4">“ Rain was left to wonder whether the Barr sisters had hopped out and headed on their way to school, or if they were attending the morning service, now.<br/><br/>Erin drew looks.  She stood out, and not just because she wasn’t a usual for the morning service.  It was in moments like this that Rain knew he wasn’t letting feelings color his views on her.  He could see the way people acted around her, the way they looked at her.<br/><br/>He was spooked, seeing it.  He knew who these people were, he’d grown up with them, and he knew how they functioned.  On a level, he was one of them. - [https://www.parahumans.net/2018/02/06/shade-interlude-4a/ Excerpt] from [[Interlude 4a II]]</ref> Her parents were trying to convince her to marry someone. Rain also found her to be very attractive.