Editing Missing Interlude (section)

==Issues==
Wildbow and readers took issue with the Missing Interlude for various reasons:<ref>The problems:<br>
*The origin of the character was poorly done.  It made sense in-setting, but to readers, it took place over two offscreen moments.<br>
*The introduction of the character was unnecessary.  It didn’t serve the story.<br>
*The tone of the story suffered for her introduction.  Basically a gut punch at a time when things should have been letting up/winding down.<br>
*The character wasn’t in line with the setting as laid out.  Her behavior as compared to other clones was patient.
*The scenario the character was worked into was both forced and unbelievable:her joining the Irregulars, them not questioning the introduction of an amnesiac after anti-Stranger measures were established midway through arc 18, her being immediately given a management position. - [https://parahumans.wordpress.com/f-a-q/ Worm FAQ]</ref>
*Witness's origins were done poorly and felt shoe-horned.
*The introduction of Witness was unnecessary and didn't serve the story.
*The interlude was a gut punch during a time when the tone of the story should've been giving the reader a break.
*Witness's patient behavior was inconsistent with that of other Echidna clones.
*The events of the interlude were implausible: the Irregulars do not question Witness after the previous implementation of anti-Stranger measures and immediately give her a management position within their group.