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J. C. McCraw has commented on his efficiency abilities effecting his social interactions, find and post, look up word of god respiratory | |||
should the character pages be broken up? | should the character pages be broken up? | ||
[http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Monkey_D._Luffy/Personality_and_Relationships can this ] | [http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Monkey_D._Luffy/Personality_and_Relationships can this ] | ||
[http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Monkey_D._Luffy/History be copied] we are doing something like it with identity segmentation manton and siberian, noelle and echidna, Alexandria and rebecca costa-brown. the tab system seems to be largly working | [http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Monkey_D._Luffy/History be copied] we are doing something like it with identity segmentation manton and siberian, noelle and echidna, Alexandria and rebecca costa-brown. the tab system seems to be largly working | ||
[https://www.reddit.com/r/Parahumans/comments/3dc0wz/lets_say_you_can_choose_the_classification_and/ct3ssij/ Tinker 15] | |||
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<nowiki><ref name="Story Arc"></nowiki>Guts & Glory Story Arc as it stands<br><br>Panacea - born Amelia, Marquis' daughter, he only took custody of her after her mother died of cancer.<br><br>Around the age of five or six, the Brockton Bay Brigade (later to become New Wave) attacked Marquis in his home. He protected Amelia with his body, taking a critical blow, and was later brought into custody.<br><br>Amelia was taken in by Brandish and Flashbang, because they were afraid she'd be abused/kidnapped by others who'd blame her for Marquis' actions or use the chance that she was that much more likely to trigger to get a child with powers.<br><br>A short time later, the Brockton Bay Brigade unmasked before the public, advocating capes without masks.<br><br>A short time after that, Fleur was murdered in her civilian identity, putting an end to that movement. Lightstar (brother to Carol/Brandish and Sarah/Lady Photon) quit the team.<br><br>Amelia's (Now Amy's) childhood was somewhat lonely - Carol/Brandish didn't quite want her, Flashbang was battling clinical depression. Amy grew close to her adoptive sister, Victoria, who was the same age as her.<br><br>On being informed that she was the daughter of a notorious villain, she withdrew into herself some. She became worried that she'd follow in his footsteps (quite possibly helped by Carol/Brandish's attitude).<br><br>Victoria triggered (easily) in gym class, started to go out in costume, more and more as years went on, as Glory Girl.<br><br>Amy triggered a little later on. It was more devastating than joyous, because it was one step closer to her following her father's path. There was a great deal of pressure as well (outlined in the latter half of interlude 3), with her inability to heal everyone.<br><br>Carol's attitude, one can guess, became even more distant.<br><br>Amy realized she had feelings for Victoria. She bottled them up. Readers have speculated that Glory Girl's 'awe' aura might have had long term effects on the emotionally vulnerable Amy, helping this along (or making it happen).<br><br>Bank Robbery (late chapters in arc 3) - Tattletale threatens to out Amy and/or tell her her father's identity. Amy freaks.<br><br>Post-Bank Robbery - Amy has a conversation with Gallant, she confesses the strain of having a healing power, he notes how close she is to breaking, and that she has 'strong' feelings towards him. Implied to be love, but it's (as later stated) jealousy and resentment; he's the guy who's dating the girl she loves.<br><br>Endbringer attack - Gallant dies. Flashbang (Victoria and Amy's father) receives a head injury. Amy's desperately afraid of using her powers on people's brains because she knows how easily she could cross a line, and doesn't heal dad. Grows more distant from the rest of her family. Victoria is upset that Amy won't provide emotional support after Gallant (Victoria's boyfriend) dies. Amy's struggling with her mixed feelings over his death. Gap widens.<br><br>Things come to a head when the S9 arrive. Amy finds out who her dad is, and Bonesaw forces Amy to either heal her adoptive father's brain or let him die, and Amy heals him. Convinced there's no way she can stay, she flees, striking out on her own. Victoria intercepts her, and a shaken Amy unconsciously/unwittingly uses this previously unexplored aspect of her power on her sister, altering Victoria's feelings for her. Victoria runs.<br><br>S9 continue rampage, and Amy gets swept up into it when Mannequin and Siberian attack her. She temporarily teams up with Undersiders to give a helping hand and to help her sister. Victoria gets injured by Crawler, Skitter rescues her, Amy stalls the damage and puts Victoria in a cocoon of fleshy bits, to restore the previous damage. Flees.<br><br>Jack and Bonesaw catch up with Amy, and Jack engages in head games with the already unbalanced, unstable girl. Skitter intervenes before giving chase to Jack/Bonesaw. Amy/Victoria flee.<br><br>S9 arc resolves. In the wake of it, Carol/Brandish is left wondering where her daughters are. They finally get a lead (thanks to Tattletale, in exchange for New Wave leaving Undersiders alone) and find a distraught Amy. The girl used her power on Glory Girl, and at the end of her rope, suffering a mental breakdown at at least one point, she used her power on Victoria, and forgot how to put the girl back together. Using her power only forces her to face the scale of the changes she's already made, and in panic/desperation she does more damage than she fixes.<br><br>Victoria goes to Asylum. Amy asks to go to the Birdcage, and authorities weigh the risk of her having another breakdown (and creating a plague that eats plastic/glass/stone/whatever/doing a lot of damage to a lot of people) against the risks of incarceration, put her in Birdcage. Amy reunites with her father.<br><br>In Marquis' arc, we see Amy trying to come to terms with what she did. Marquis is trying to ensure she (and he) don't face rebellion from within his cell block due to the issues her presence poses, and organizes a meeting with the other cell block leaders. He manipulates and charms his way through the worst of it. The meeting of Amy and Glaistig Uaine (a cell block leader with the ability to retain the 'spirits' of recently dead parahumans, along with their powers) clues Amy into something. She thinks she's figured out a crucial piece of the overall puzzle, and outlines it all to the surveillance systems that Dragon has in the prison, in the hopes that Dragon will pick up on it and act on the information. The Simurgh alters course and blocks/muddles the signal, and Dragon doesn't receive it.<br><br>Amy gets a tattoo so she has a reminder of Victoria and the crime Amy committed against her, without having to dwell so heavily on it. - [https://forum.rpg.net/showthread.php?682837-Worm-Bet-the-Alternate-Thread-The-Star-Wars-Prequel-Trilogy-Still-Sucks-Though&p=16772221#post16772221 Comment by Wildbow regarding story arc]</ref> | |||
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For when a Madison Wisconsin page is created, https://www.reddit.com/r/Parahumans/comments/2w65qh/a_better_worm_cyoa/. | For when a Madison Wisconsin page is created, https://www.reddit.com/r/Parahumans/comments/2w65qh/a_better_worm_cyoa/. | ||
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=== parallels to other works === | === parallels to other works === | ||
===PRT Quest documents=== | ===PRT Quest documents=== | ||
[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v8zPROEoXRorAadrkl62Wvx3i7Q2AYQ511M6PHcP16c/edit# 'villains' documents] <br> | [https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v8zPROEoXRorAadrkl62Wvx3i7Q2AYQ511M6PHcP16c/edit# 'villains' documents] <br> | ||
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Has anyone ever graduated from the ambassadors and moved outside accord's immediate sphere of influence to further his plans? | Has anyone ever graduated from the ambassadors and moved outside accord's immediate sphere of influence to further his plans? | ||
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Insects generally have bad eyesight: | Insects generally have bad eyesight: | ||
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==New project focusing on the drafts page== | ==New project focusing on the drafts page== | ||
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[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/04/17/sentinel-9-5/#comment-1750 | [https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/04/17/sentinel-9-5/#comment-1750 | ||
The post [https://wildbow.wordpress.com/2013/12/28/snippets-drafts-of-worm/ in question]<ref name="9.x">[[Prey 14.8]]</ref> | |||
Some of this was mentioned before | |||
ref name="14.8 c2" - [https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4571 another comment] by wildbow on [[Prey 14.8]]</ref> | |||
, but I don't remember if it was all gathered in one place, so...I'm gathering it in one place. From the Chapter 14.8 comments: | |||
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Relevance? Well, I think it marks one of my first in-setting attempts to show a hostile takeover by villains (Supreme Earth was such on a much larger scale) and their attempts to manage a city once they’d seized it. Why didn’t it work? Narwhal was too powerful for a protagonist, and the length would have put it into an awkward place, too long for a short story and too short for a novel or even a novella. Once I realized that, I lost steam.--> | Relevance? Well, I think it marks one of my first in-setting attempts to show a hostile takeover by villains (Supreme Earth was such on a much larger scale) and their attempts to manage a city once they’d seized it. Why didn’t it work? Narwhal was too powerful for a protagonist, and the length would have put it into an awkward place, too long for a short story and too short for a novel or even a novella. Once I realized that, I lost steam.--> | ||
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