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Ziggurat is an early draft of Worm, predating the creation of the Undersiders.<ref>Comment by Wildbow</ref>

Synopsis

During an Endbringer attack, a group of junior villains take over a city, trapping the residents in a ring of stone walls. It switched perspectives between the villains and the heroes fighting Hadhayosh. It would eventually merge into a singular story-line where Narwhal tries to deal with the captured city.<ref name="WoG1">Comment by Wildbow</ref>

Characters

Narwhal

Trivia

Ziggurat is one of the first drafts to show a hostile takeover by villains and their attempts to manage a city once they'd seized it. <ref name="WoG1">Comment by Wildbow</ref>
It lost steam after J. C. McCraw realized that Narwhal was too powerful for a protagonist and that the length would have put it in an awkward place-too long for a short story and too short for a novel or a novella.<ref name="WoG1">Comment by Wildbow</ref>

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-'''Ziggurat''' is an early draft of Worm.
+'''Ziggurat''' is an early draft of Worm, predating the creation of the [[Undersiders]].<ref>[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4571 Comment by Wildbow]</ref>
 ==Synopsis==
-During an [[Endbringer]] attack, a group of junior villains take over a city, trapping the residents in a ring of stone walls. It switched perspectives from the villains to the heroes fighting [[Hadhayosh]]. It would eventually merge into a singular story-line where [[Narwhal]] tries to deal with the captured city.
+During an [[Endbringer]] attack, a group of junior villains take over a city, trapping the residents in a ring of stone walls. It switched perspectives between the villains and the heroes fighting [[Hadhayosh]]. It would eventually merge into a singular story-line where [[Narwhal]] tries to deal with the captured city.<ref name="WoG1">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4582 Comment by Wildbow]</ref>
 == Characters ==
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 ==Trivia==
-*Ziggurat is one of the first drafts to show a hostile takeover by villains and their attempts to manage a city once they'd seized it.
+*Ziggurat is one of the first drafts to show a hostile takeover by villains and their attempts to manage a city once they'd seized it. <ref name="WoG1">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4582 Comment by Wildbow]</ref>
-**It lost steam after J. C. McCraw realized that Narwhal was too powerful for a protagonist and that the length would have put it in an awkward place-too long for a short story and too short for a novel or a novella.
+*It lost steam after J. C. McCraw realized that Narwhal was too powerful for a protagonist and that the length would have put it in an awkward place-too long for a short story and too short for a novel or a novella.<ref name="WoG1">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4582 Comment by Wildbow]</ref>
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