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==Synopsis== | ==Synopsis== | ||
The events leading up to that Thursday is one of the recurring title in worm | |||
draft featured rotating viewpoints attempting to incorporate everyone I’d added into the story by that point in one overarching story. First draft focused heavily on Faultline, introduced Scion, Legend, Narwhal, Hero, Alexandria and a major heroine named Mary Sue. Introduced Faultline’s crew, which was composed of Newter, Slug (Gregor), Spitfire and a scandanavian girl with Genesis’ power. Later drafts introduced Endbringers, Dauntless, and Cauldron-A group of rogues and solo villains try to hold out against recruitment by a much larger cape group. The Elite in this story resembles a cross between the [[Slaughterhouse Nine]], the canon [[Elite]] and [[Cauldron]]. | |||
Not the first draft of TELUTT, the story switched between Faultline, the Triumvirate and Guts & Glory. It was an attempt at tying everything in together. I like that there’s one scene in there (At the end) that was pretty much copied exactly and inserted into Worm, even though I haven’t opened these documents in a long, long time. The nature of Faultline’s meeting with her ‘crew’ is essentially what happened in canon. That said, wow, are my protagonists a pain in the ass to read this early on (arrogant/annoying). At this juncture, I was still figuring out a way to make powers interesting. I was bored with many of them, and I was lapsing into some of the ‘standby’ powers, like tinkers without anything interesting to them. | |||
=== introduced concepts === | === introduced concepts === | ||
* The [[Birdcage]] is mentioned | |||
== Groups == | == Groups == | ||
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* [[Newter]] | * [[Newter]] | ||
* [[Spitfire]] | * [[Spitfire]] | ||
* [[Gregor the Snail|Slug (Gregor)]] here a short tempered bully instead of an itinerant philosopher. | |||
=== [[Protectorate]] === | === [[Protectorate]] === | ||
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=== Others === | === Others === | ||
* [[Dauntless]] | |||
* [[Siberian]] | * [[Siberian]] | ||
Revision as of 03:17, July 26, 2016
The events leading up to that Thursday or TELUTT for brevity and sanity.
In the version available to read
Synopsis
The events leading up to that Thursday is one of the recurring title in worm
draft featured rotating viewpoints attempting to incorporate everyone I’d added into the story by that point in one overarching story. First draft focused heavily on Faultline, introduced Scion, Legend, Narwhal, Hero, Alexandria and a major heroine named Mary Sue. Introduced Faultline’s crew, which was composed of Newter, Slug (Gregor), Spitfire and a scandanavian girl with Genesis’ power. Later drafts introduced Endbringers, Dauntless, and Cauldron-A group of rogues and solo villains try to hold out against recruitment by a much larger cape group. The Elite in this story resembles a cross between the Slaughterhouse Nine, the canon Elite and Cauldron.
Not the first draft of TELUTT, the story switched between Faultline, the Triumvirate and Guts & Glory. It was an attempt at tying everything in together. I like that there’s one scene in there (At the end) that was pretty much copied exactly and inserted into Worm, even though I haven’t opened these documents in a long, long time. The nature of Faultline’s meeting with her ‘crew’ is essentially what happened in canon. That said, wow, are my protagonists a pain in the ass to read this early on (arrogant/annoying). At this juncture, I was still figuring out a way to make powers interesting. I was bored with many of them, and I was lapsing into some of the ‘standby’ powers, like tinkers without anything interesting to them.
introduced concepts
- The Birdcage is mentioned
Groups
Characters
Faultline’s Crew (unamed)
- Faultline
- Newter
- Spitfire
- Slug (Gregor) here a short tempered bully instead of an itinerant philosopher.
Protectorate
Others
References
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