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Family
Eden
Gender	Female
Family	Zion (Mate)

Eden is Scion's counterpart and the source of half of the superpowers granted to mankind.

Background

As Eden began to approach Earth, she drew towards Scion before they began to pick out various sub-worlds for themselves and their shards. She was Scion's constant communications distracting as she was using her powers to begin mapping out their actions after their arrival. She started to reform herself for a deeper simulation when she noticed a third broadcast. Recognizing that it was a broadcast from another Entity, Eden hesitated before sending a broadcast signaling her location.

The third Entity sent a garbled reply and Eden spent time analyzing it. She was then met by the third Entity who rammed against her in an ancient tradition meant to exchange shards. She worked to salvage key shards and give ones she could afford to lose on to the other Entity. Eden and the third Entity broke apart before Scion broadcasted his concern.

Eden sent a confident response back and allowed Scion to take over some of her duties before she looked through her new shards. After looking through them, she began to form a simulacrum of the host species, set out criteria for an optimal future, and then looked for a future that matched that optimal future.

Scion interrupts the simulation, asking about their destination, and Eden absently agrees. She think on the future she had seen and starts to refine it. She reorganizes herself as she approaches their destination and sends Scion a confident reply when he expresses concern. Eden continues to work on her reorganization until she hits the ground.

On the way down, Eden alters one of the third Entities' shards, replacing her own ability to find the optimal future. She realizes that she has made a mistake too late to fix it and hits the ground hard.

Later, Eden starts to pull herself together. She starts to experiment as she works to create a humanoid avatar. After some time, she raises her head and opened her eyes to see Fortuna standing before her. She realizes that Fortuna possessed the shard she had discarded and restricted it - rendering her and others like her immune to the shard's future-seeing power. Eden then dismissed Fortuna before it continued to create her avatar and bent over.

Doctor Mother drove a knife into her neck - severing a connection when she was most vulnerable. Eden struggled to form itself and failed. Eden died.

Personality

[Coming Soon]

Abilities and Powers

[Coming Soon]

Legacy

Following her death, Eden's body was used by Cauldron as a source of serums to give people powers, i.e. to connect them to Eden's shards; although there are some natural triggers with Eden shards, e.g. Leet.

Trivia

The name "Eden" is not used in the text - it was invented in a comment by a fan and then used as a character tag on the Interlude.

References

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-'''Eden''' is an Entity. She is [[Scion|Zion's]] counterpart, and one of the two sources of the various superpowers that were granted to humanity.
+'''Eden''' is Scion's counterpart and the source of half of the superpowers granted to mankind.
 ==Background==
-As they approached their destination, the Thinker and the Warrior drew together and picked out various sub-worlds for themselves; arrival points, destinations for their shards to root, and hosts for the extensions of those shards. It saw the Warrior's constant communications distracting as it was using its powers to map out their actions after their arrival. It reformed itself for deeper simulation before it noticed a third broadcast. It recognized the broadcast as from another member of its species, hesitated and then signaled its own location.
+As Eden began to approach Earth, she drew towards Scion before they began to pick out various sub-worlds for themselves and their shards. She was Scion's constant communications distracting as she was using her powers to begin mapping out their actions after their arrival. She started to reform herself for a deeper simulation when she noticed a third broadcast. Recognizing that it was a broadcast from another Entity, Eden hesitated before sending a broadcast signaling her location.
-It received a garbled reply and takes time to analyze it. The meeting between it and the third entity was violent - grinding together, destroying one another in a brutal exchange of shards. It worked to salvage key shards, to put ones it could afford to lose on the exterior body. They break apart before the Warrior expresses concern and the Thinker sends a confident response back.
+The third Entity sent a garbled reply and Eden spent time analyzing it. She was then met by the third Entity who rammed against her in an ancient tradition meant to exchange shards. She worked to salvage key shards and give ones she could afford to lose on to the other Entity. Eden and the third Entity broke apart before Scion broadcasted his concern.
-The Thinker allowed the Warrior to take over some of its duties before looking through its new shards. It begins to form a simulacrums of the host species, sets out criteria for an optimal future, and then looks to a future that matches it. The Warrior interrupts the simulation and it absently agrees on their destination. It thinks about the future it had seen, refining it as the Warrior refines the shards. It reorganizes itself as it and the Warrior approach and, despite the Warrior's warning, sends out a confident reply.
+Eden sent a confident response back and allowed Scion to take over some of her duties before she looked through her new shards. After looking through them, she began to form a simulacrum of the host species, set out criteria for an optimal future, and then looked for a future that matched that optimal future.
-It works on the reorganization until it hits the ground. In doing so, it alters one of the third entity’s powers, replacing its own ability to find the optimal future. It realizes it made a mistake, too late, and hits the ground too hard.
+Scion interrupts the simulation, asking about their destination, and Eden absently agrees. She think on the future she had seen and starts to refine it. She reorganizes herself as she approaches their destination and sends Scion a confident reply when he expresses concern. Eden continues to work on her reorganization until she hits the ground.
-The Thinker started to pull itself together. It opened raised its head and opened its eyes to see [[Fortuna]] before it and recognized that she had the shard it had discarded. It used its barrier to restrict the shard, rendering it and others like it immune to her power, and smiled. It continued to create its avatar and bent over.
+On the way down, Eden alters one of the third Entities' shards, replacing her own ability to find the optimal future. She realizes that she has made a mistake too late to fix it and hits the ground hard.
-[[Doctor Mother]] drove a knife into its neck - severing a connection when it was most vulnerable. The Thinker struggled to form itself and failed. Then, the Thinker died.
+Later, Eden starts to pull herself together. She starts to experiment as she works to create a humanoid avatar. After some time, she raises her head and opened her eyes to see [[Fortuna]] standing before her. She realizes that Fortuna possessed the shard she had discarded and restricted it - rendering her and others like her immune to the shard's future-seeing power. Eden then dismissed Fortuna before it continued to create her avatar and bent over.
+[[Doctor Mother]] drove a knife into her neck - severing a connection when she was most vulnerable. Eden struggled to form itself and failed. Eden died.
 ==Personality==
 [Coming Soon]