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The Events Leading Up To That Thursday, also known as TELUTT, was one of the recurring titles for what would become Worm. TELUTT had roughly four concrete versions.

Synopsis

In the version available to read. The events leading up to that Thursday is one of the recurring title in Worm. Draft featured rotating viewpoints attempting to incorporate everyone I’d added into the story by that point in one overarching story. First draft focused heavily on Faultline. Introduced Faultline’s crew, which was composed of Newter, Slug (Gregor), Spitfire and a scandinavian girl with Genesis’ power. Later drafts introduced Endbringers, Dauntless, and

Not the first draft of TELUTT, the story switched between Faultline, the Triumvirate and Guts & Glory. It was an attempt at tying everything in together. I like that there’s one scene in there (At the end) that was pretty much copied exactly and inserted into Worm, even though I haven’t opened these documents in a long, long time. The nature of Faultline’s meeting with her ‘crew’ is essentially what happened in canon. That said, wow, are my protagonists a pain in the ass to read this early on (arrogant/annoying). At this juncture, I was still figuring out a way to make powers interesting. I was bored with many of them, and I was lapsing into some of the ‘standby’ powers, like tinkers without anything interesting to them.<ref>Snippets: Before Worm</ref>

Introduced Concepts

The Birdcage is mentioned,
Mary Sue who would become Eidolon
Scion and the "Progenitor Theory" that he is the source of all superhero's

Groups

Cauldron-A group of rogues and solo villains try to hold out against recruitment by a much larger cape group. The Elite in this story resembles a cross between the Slaughterhouse Nine, the canon Elite and Cauldron.<ref>https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4575 another comment by wildbow</ref>

Characters

Faultline’s Crew (unamed)

Faultline
Newter
Spitfire
Slug (Gregor) here a short tempered bully instead of an itinerant philosopher.

Protectorate

Alexandria (first appearance in drafting process)
Legend (first appearence)
Exhalt, an early version of Hero filled with doubt

Others

References

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-The events leading up to that Thursday or TELUTT for brevity and sanity. one of the recurring titles for what would be worm, TELUTT had roughly four concrete versions.
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+'''The Events Leading Up To That Thursday''', also known as TELUTT, was one of the recurring titles for what would become Worm. TELUTT had roughly four concrete versions.
 ==Synopsis==
-In the version [https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Szmsr8ENCxPFv1MVKP39UKJ-TXZbUvivxUs_oxKoR3I/edit available to read] The events leading up to that Thursday is one of the recurring title in worm
+In the version [https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Szmsr8ENCxPFv1MVKP39UKJ-TXZbUvivxUs_oxKoR3I/edit available to read]. The events leading up to that Thursday is one of the recurring title in Worm. Draft featured rotating viewpoints attempting to incorporate everyone I’d added into the story by that point in one overarching story. First draft focused heavily on Faultline. Introduced Faultline’s crew, which was composed of Newter, Slug (Gregor), Spitfire and a scandinavian girl with Genesis’ power. Later drafts introduced Endbringers, Dauntless, and
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-raft featured rotating viewpoints attempting to incorporate everyone I’d added into the story by that point in one overarching story. First draft focused heavily on Faultline, . Introduced Faultline’s crew, which was composed of Newter, Slug (Gregor), Spitfire and a scandanavian girl with Genesis’ power. Later drafts introduced Endbringers, Dauntless, and
-Not the first draft of TELUTT, the story switched between Faultline, the Triumvirate and Guts & Glory.  It was an attempt at tying everything in together.  I like that there’s one scene in there (At the end) that was pretty much copied exactly and inserted into Worm, even though I haven’t opened these documents in a long, long time.  The nature of Faultline’s meeting with her ‘crew’ is essentially what happened in canon.  That said, wow, are my protagonists a pain in the ass to read this early on (arrogant/annoying).  At this juncture, I was still figuring out a way to make powers interesting.  I was bored with many of them, and I was lapsing into some of the ‘standby’ powers, like tinkers without anything interesting to them.
+<blockquote>Not the first draft of TELUTT, the story switched between Faultline, the Triumvirate and Guts & Glory.  It was an attempt at tying everything in together.  I like that there’s one scene in there (At the end) that was pretty much copied exactly and inserted into Worm, even though I haven’t opened these documents in a long, long time.  The nature of Faultline’s meeting with her ‘crew’ is essentially what happened in canon.  That said, wow, are my protagonists a pain in the ass to read this early on (arrogant/annoying).  At this juncture, I was still figuring out a way to make powers interesting.  I was bored with many of them, and I was lapsing into some of the ‘standby’ powers, like tinkers without anything interesting to them.<ref>[https://wildbow.wordpress.com/2013/12/28/snippets-drafts-of-worm/ Snippets: Before Worm]</ref>
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-=== introduced concepts ===
+=== Introduced Concepts ===
 * The [[Birdcage]] is mentioned,
 * Mary Sue who would become Eidolon
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 === [[Protectorate]] ===
 * [[Alexandria]] (first appearance in drafting process)
-* [[Legend]] (same as Alexandria)
+* [[Legend]] (first appearence)
-* [[Hero|Exhalt]] an early version of hero filled with doubt
+* [[Hero|Exhalt]], an early version of Hero filled with doubt
 === Others ===