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The first draft of Guts & Glory extends from [[New Wave|the Brockton Bay Brigade]]'s adoption of Amy Dallon to her [[trigger event]]. The second draft of Guts & Glory starts when Amy discovers the identity of [[Marquis|her father]] and begins to break down. The third draft was an attempt to tie these first two drafts together, while Wildbow also attempted a fourth and final draft.<ref name="Draft"/><ref name="14.8c1">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4510 Comment by Wildbow] on [[Prey 14.8]]</ref> | The first draft of Guts & Glory extends from [[New Wave|the Brockton Bay Brigade]]'s adoption of Amy Dallon to her [[trigger event]]. The second draft of Guts & Glory starts when Amy discovers the identity of [[Marquis|her father]] and begins to break down. The third draft was an attempt to tie these first two drafts together, while Wildbow also attempted a fourth and final draft.<ref name="Draft"/><ref name="14.8c1">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4510 Comment by Wildbow] on [[Prey 14.8]]</ref> | ||
==Charecters== | ==Charecters== | ||
=== Appearing in available draft=== | |||
*Guts: An early version of Panacea named Annie here. She shares many traits with [[Taylor]] like black curly hair, insecurities about her figure, and social anxiety. | *Guts: An early version of Panacea named Annie here. She shares many traits with [[Taylor]] like black curly hair, insecurities about her figure, and social anxiety. | ||
*Glory: An early version of Glory Girl, still named Victoria. Gregarious, she makes Annie feel welcome when she is adopted. | *Glory: An early version of Glory Girl, still named Victoria. Gregarious, she makes Annie feel welcome when she is adopted. | ||
*Brett: An early version of [[Gallant]], implied to have his aura vision. Had the story been pursued, a stronger relationship between him and Annie would have been the focus. | *Brett: An early version of [[Gallant]], implied to have his aura vision. Had the story been pursued, a stronger relationship between him and Annie would have been the focus. | ||
*Cole: Like [[Triumph]], the mayor's son. | *Cole: Like [[Triumph]], the mayor's son. | ||
=== Not appearing in Available Draft<ref name="I13.5c1"/>=== | |||
==== [[The Nine]] ==== | |||
*[[Ned|Troll]] | |||
*[[Shatterbird|Breaker]] | |||
*[[Riley|The Maiden]] | |||
*[[Nice Guy]] | |||
==Trivia== | ==Trivia== | ||
*Guts & Glory was the draft in which the [[Slaughterhouse Nine]] and [[Bonesaw]] were first conceptualized.<ref name="comment">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/05/17/interlude-10-5-bonus/#comment-2121 wildbow comment] on [[Interlude 10.5 (Bonus)]]</ref> They would gain their final names later. | *Guts & Glory was the draft in which the [[Slaughterhouse Nine]] and [[Bonesaw]] were first conceptualized.<ref name="comment">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/05/17/interlude-10-5-bonus/#comment-2121 wildbow comment] on [[Interlude 10.5 (Bonus)]]</ref> <ref name="I13.5c1">[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/08/02/interlude-13%C2%BD-donation-bonus/#comment-3340 Comment by Wildbow on] [[Interlude 13.5 (Donation Bonus)]]</ref> They would gain their final names later. | ||
*Many characters' civilian and cape names differ between Guts & Glory and the final draft of Worm. | *Many characters' civilian and cape names differ between Guts & Glory and the final draft of Worm. | ||
**In Guts & Glory, Panacea is named Annie rather than Amy, [[Triumph]] is named Cole rather than Rory, [[Gallant]] is named Brett rather than Dean, and [[Flashbang]] is named Nick rather than Mark, while [[Brandish]]'s cape name is Arc, and [[Manpower]]'s cape name is Mantower.<ref name="Draft"/> | **In Guts & Glory, Panacea is named Annie rather than Amy, [[Triumph]] is named Cole rather than Rory, [[Gallant]] is named Brett rather than Dean, and [[Flashbang]] is named Nick rather than Mark, while [[Brandish]]'s cape name is Arc, and [[Manpower]]'s cape name is Mantower.<ref name="Draft"/> | ||
Revision as of 23:46, September 21, 2016
Guts & Glory was a recurring title that was taken up and dropped several times in the drafting of what would Worm. Its rotating protagonists and point-of-view characters were Panacea and Glory Girl.<ref>Post by Wildbow on his blog</ref><ref name="Draft">Partial text of Guts & Glory</ref>
Synopsis
The first draft of Guts & Glory extends from the Brockton Bay Brigade's adoption of Amy Dallon to her trigger event. The second draft of Guts & Glory starts when Amy discovers the identity of her father and begins to break down. The third draft was an attempt to tie these first two drafts together, while Wildbow also attempted a fourth and final draft.<ref name="Draft"/><ref name="14.8c1">Comment by Wildbow on Prey 14.8</ref>
Charecters
Appearing in available draft
- Guts: An early version of Panacea named Annie here. She shares many traits with Taylor like black curly hair, insecurities about her figure, and social anxiety.
- Glory: An early version of Glory Girl, still named Victoria. Gregarious, she makes Annie feel welcome when she is adopted.
- Brett: An early version of Gallant, implied to have his aura vision. Had the story been pursued, a stronger relationship between him and Annie would have been the focus.
- Cole: Like Triumph, the mayor's son.
Not appearing in Available Draft<ref name="I13.5c1"/>
The Nine
Trivia
- Guts & Glory was the draft in which the Slaughterhouse Nine and Bonesaw were first conceptualized.<ref name="comment">wildbow comment on Interlude 10.5 (Bonus)</ref> <ref name="I13.5c1">Comment by Wildbow on Interlude 13.5 (Donation Bonus)</ref> They would gain their final names later.
- Many characters' civilian and cape names differ between Guts & Glory and the final draft of Worm.
References
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