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"Being kidnapped turned into a monster, and then illegally detained for who knows how long... She has a right to be pissed." | "Being kidnapped turned into a monster, and then illegally detained for who knows how long... She has a right to be pissed." | ||
Seems a bit opinionated, I'd suggest making it sound less action-y and more objective. | Seems a bit opinionated, I'd suggest making it sound less action-y and more objective. | ||
"[ | "[[Myrddin]] identified her power as a form of retribution." | ||
Can we get a citation on this? | Can we get a citation on this? | ||
[[User:DestroyedClone|DestroyedClone]] ([[User talk:DestroyedClone|talk]]) 07:05, February 1, 2019 (UTC) | [[User:DestroyedClone|DestroyedClone]] ([[User talk:DestroyedClone|talk]]) 07:05, February 1, 2019 (UTC) | ||
*By all means make it objective, it was just an attempt to explain her personality. Further Myrrddin talks about it right before Armsmaster uses the smokescreen and sets her on fire. Right in Migration 17.4. Thanks for editing.--[[User:FossilLord|FossilLord]] ([[User talk:FossilLord|talk]]) 14:51, February 1, 2019 (UTC) | |||
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"Being kidnapped turned into a monster, and then illegally detained for who knows how long... She has a right to be pissed." Seems a bit opinionated, I'd suggest making it sound less action-y and more objective. "Myrddin identified her power as a form of retribution." Can we get a citation on this? DestroyedClone (talk) 07:05, February 1, 2019 (UTC)
- By all means make it objective, it was just an attempt to explain her personality. Further Myrrddin talks about it right before Armsmaster uses the smokescreen and sets her on fire. Right in Migration 17.4. Thanks for editing.--FossilLord (talk) 14:51, February 1, 2019 (UTC)