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It seems this page is poorly written. The history section is no more than a turn-by-turn recounting of their first battle, and actual historical events are all omitted (such as being turned into Hack Job or fighting Jack Slash). History should be a brief summary of events and their outcomes, not a two page excerpt of a single event.

There are also numerous punctuation errors.

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