Editing End of Glory Girl (section)

==Trivia==
* It is important to note that Wildbow is a horror writer. While it can be presumed that Amy did sexually assault her adopted sister that is yet another crime in addition to her mutilation.
* While it is unknown how much of this was storyline was planned the originals ending in the Drafts was considered too dark.<ref>Before I settled on Taylor as a protagonist, I wrote a lot of snippets, most characters showed up in one snippet or another. 'Guts and Glory' featured Amy and Victoria's story, told in full, and it basically reached the point you see here, except the PRT didn't send her to the Birdcage, which was the worse outcome. - [https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/2992111 WB on Sufficient Velocity].</ref> Just as a comparison.<ref name="14.8 c1">The first draft extended from the day that The Brockton Bay Brigade found Amy to the day she got her powers. Kind of unique among those early stories because it remained relatively unscathed through multiple drafts & the worldbuilding that followed. Almost to the point that I could point to it and call it all canon. This was where I first introduced the Nine. Jack (Jack Knife), Crawler (‘Skitter’) and Shatterbird (‘Breaker’) and Mannequin were all in the group, more or less as they are here, along with others that included Nice Guy and Murder Rat. Glory Girl got sliced up by Jack, Amy had her trigger event, healed her sister and the tide was turned enough that the Nine retreated for another day.<br><br>The second draft took place much later. Amy discovers who her dad is, and much as she does in Worm, she begins breaking down, the facade she had up begins to crack. Marquis was introduced here, and the family was fleshed out.<br><br>The third draft was pretty much an attempt to join the previous drafts together, with material to flesh them out and fill in the gap. Victoria’s relationship with Gallant was built here, but he was different. He had a friend who had the emotion reading ability (who was set up with Amy) while his own abilities were a little more offensive, and he played up the gentleman angle more. I tried my hand at the ending, decided it was too dark, and basically gave up on Guts and Glory at that point. - [https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/prey-14-8/#comment-4574 Comment by] Wildbow on [[Prey 14.8]]</ref>
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