Talk:End of Glory Girl

Page rewrite

The title, summary and body of this page is needlessly melodramatic, while this sentence,

Amy's description of her intentions in modifying Victoria lead one to think of rape and she did use her power to change Victoria's body, essentially mutilating her sister.

cannot be interpreted as anything other than apologia for Amy and whitewashing of the very real rape that had occurred and she is guilty of. In fact, most of this page tries to put Amy into a better light than she deserves, and it is not like Ward hadn't been started yet when this page was created.

At the very least, change the title of this page to 'Glory Girl kidnap', because I can't, and I'll start the work on rewriting this page from the ground up.

- Crazed Dutchman